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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #135: April 21, 2013, 07:01:54 PM »
Ah..seems I haven't updated this in a while. Oh well, lots to read then for those who depend on this thread for updates.

The first part of The Pale Rose is done. Link: The Pale Rose - Part One

He Who Seeks is also done. Link: He Who Seeks
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« Reply #136: April 23, 2013, 07:25:25 PM »
He Who Seeks
You just killed my favourite story.

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« Reply #137: May 12, 2013, 04:14:15 PM »
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You just killed my favourite story.

All good things come to an end. It was never meant to be that long a story :)

New chapter of The Pale Rose is out and it start part two of the story.

Link: The Pale Rose - Part Two

Also, there's a new side project called Heart Hunter. Check it out if you feel like it.
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« Reply #138: September 22, 2013, 06:19:01 PM »
Been a while.

Latest updates(The Pale Rose chapter 10) in this post: http://lilwolf.biz/?p=533
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« Reply #139: November 27, 2013, 04:25:00 AM »
He Who Seeks, good story. I am surprised at the last part ;)
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« Reply #140: December 29, 2013, 05:48:54 PM »
Hum, long time since last update. Time I corrected that.

Chapter 22 of The Pale Rose is upon us so the story has gone quite a way since I last updated this thread. I'll just post the links to all the parts.

The Pale Rose – Part One (chapters 1-6)
The Pale Rose – Part Two (chapters 7-14)
The Pale Rose – Part Three (chapters 15 ->)

Now, as for the other topic of the day. I’ve been working on a novel completely unrelated to Balaria. It’s about 77k words long or 205 pages with my usual layout. It is the first part of a trilogy in the fantasy/sci-fi genre. Usually I would just start posting chapters from it, but I want to do things a bit differently with it so the story will be the best it can be. Usually, no one besides me reads my texts before I put them on-line. Now, I would like to have someone else read the text and give their opinion on it. It can be just general feedback or you can add as detailed notes to it as you’d like. If you’re interested in doing something like that, let me know. I’d really appreciate the help :)
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« Reply #141: February 16, 2014, 03:57:01 PM »
And The Pale Rose is complete. I made an EPUB version of the complete thing for those who have eBook readers or tablets. Should make reading it a bit more flexible.

The Pale Rose - Part One (complete, PDF)

The Pale Rose - Part Two (complete, PDF)

The Pale Rose - Part Three (complete, PDF)

The Pale Rose - Part Four (complete, PDF)

The Pale Rose - Complete Novel (complete, PDF)

The Pale Rose - Complete Novel (complete, EPUB)
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« Reply #142: February 17, 2014, 02:11:14 AM »
How goes the side project? Do you have the help that you were previously looking for?
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« Reply #143: February 17, 2014, 02:57:54 PM »
How goes the side project? Do you have the help that you were previously looking for?

It's done. I've edited it a few times, though I think I'll need to look it over at least one more time(fix some problems I've discovered to have in my writing). Sadly I haven't  found anyone willing to read it and give their opinion.
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« Reply #144: February 18, 2014, 02:21:50 AM »
It's done. I've edited it a few times, though I think I'll need to look it over at least one more time(fix some problems I've discovered to have in my writing). Sadly I haven't  found anyone willing to read it and give their opinion.
I am willing to do it but it will be probably 2 weeks for me to read the whole thing.
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« Reply #145: February 19, 2014, 04:34:47 PM »
I am willing to do it but it will be probably 2 weeks for me to read the whole thing.

Doesn't really matter even if it takes a month. Not like I have a deadline to keep or anything. Got plenty of shorter stories I want to work on too to keep me busy and posting stuff.

So send me a message with your email and I'll send it to you. Tell me also what file type you want it as(.odt, .doc, .pdf or what ever). Or if you don't want to give me your email I can give you a download link.

And thank you :)
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