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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #90: September 19, 2012, 05:26:36 PM »
Quote from: Fury on September 19, 2012, 05:06:11 PM
Hmmm, ship in space picks up something from another ship in space. Story title is Horizon. Event Horizon?  :o

Hah. Nothing as sinister as that :D
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« Reply #91: September 23, 2012, 05:34:16 PM »
And time for chapter 2. Now with drop caps!

The plot thickens and some clarity is brought to the entire plot of things. What is Horizon? What’s the plan? What could possibly go wrong? Read to find out.

The link: Horizon

It looks like I’ve gotten into the groove of this story so a chapter per week is the schedule from now on. Thing are going well with the further chapters and the initial stiffness is gone so I’m feeling good about my ability to keep the story going until the end. Hope you keep reading until then :)
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« Reply #92: September 24, 2012, 03:42:53 PM »
That link, like my previous complaint, just doesn't work for me  ???
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« Reply #93: September 24, 2012, 05:36:02 PM »
Quote from: Fury on September 24, 2012, 03:42:53 PM
That link, like my previous complaint, just doesn't work for me  ???

Must be something on your end since I'm seeing normal traffic on the website as a whole. Maybe flush your DNS? Other than that can't really advice much more than complaining to your internet service provider.

I've updated the alternate link I posted earlier so just hit that link in the meanwhile :)
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« Reply #94: September 24, 2012, 05:58:45 PM »
Strangely enough, I got through with an online proxy.
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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #95: September 24, 2012, 06:21:55 PM »
Right, so elves can't breathe on their home planet and need to find a new planet. I see them getting jumped by raiders. The thing that gets me is... swords on a space ship? But what I can't wait to see is... the best of magic vs the best of sci-fi battles.  ;D
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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #96: September 24, 2012, 11:02:37 PM »
Quote from: Fury on September 24, 2012, 06:21:55 PM
The thing that gets me is... swords on a space ship? But what I can't wait to see is... the best of magic vs the best of sci-fi battles.  ;D

Well, to be fair, it's only Nala who has swords, and her parents spirits are linked to them so it's not like she's going to throw them away, right? :)
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« Reply #97: September 25, 2012, 03:57:14 PM »
How about a gunblade, final fantasy style? I bet the Gardless could do it ;)
I have no preference either way. I just want to see a good battle  ;D
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« Reply #98: September 30, 2012, 08:12:18 PM »
It’s a bit later than usual, but it’s still Sunday, right? :)

This chapter introduces a few new characters and reveals some more of the plan the elves have cooked up. There’s even a bit of action for the first time in this story. I hope you enjoy it.

Link: Horizon
Alternate link also updated.

As usual, new chapter next week.
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« Reply #99: October 01, 2012, 06:59:49 PM »
The Earth elemental on the ship in space - that's a sight to see.  :)
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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #100: October 07, 2012, 05:58:36 PM »
And chapter 4 is out.

Link: Horizon
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« Reply #101: October 08, 2012, 03:09:00 PM »
Finished until Guardian Spirit Part Three. Interesting story, I am hooked :D
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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #102: October 09, 2012, 02:37:55 AM »
Quote from: Ketchum on October 08, 2012, 03:09:00 PM
Finished until Guardian Spirit Part Three. Interesting story, I am hooked :D

Glad to hear you're liking it :)
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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #103: October 14, 2012, 05:29:49 PM »
Chapter 5 is done. Enjoy :)

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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #104: October 17, 2012, 02:52:32 PM »
How would an elven commando compare with a human commando in terms of skills and abilities?
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