The Balaria Thread

[LilWolf]

Hmmm, ship in space picks up something from another ship in space. Story title is Horizon. Event Horizon?  :o

Hah. Nothing as sinister as that :D

[LilWolf]

And time for chapter 2. Now with drop caps!

The plot thickens and some clarity is brought to the entire plot of things. What is Horizon? What's the plan? What could possibly go wrong? Read to find out.

The link: Horizon

It looks like I've gotten into the groove of this story so a chapter per week is the schedule from now on. Thing are going well with the further chapters and the initial stiffness is gone so I'm feeling good about my ability to keep the story going until the end. Hope you keep reading until then :)

[Fury]

That link, like my previous complaint, just doesn't work for me  ???

[LilWolf]

That link, like my previous complaint, just doesn't work for me  ???

Must be something on your end since I'm seeing normal traffic on the website as a whole. Maybe flush your DNS? Other than that can't really advice much more than complaining to your internet service provider.

I've updated the alternate link I posted earlier so just hit that link in the meanwhile :)

[Fury]

Strangely enough, I got through with an online proxy.

[Fury]

Right, so elves can't breathe on their home planet and need to find a new planet. I see them getting jumped by raiders. The thing that gets me is... swords on a space ship? But what I can't wait to see is... the best of magic vs the best of sci-fi battles.  ;D

[LilWolf]

The thing that gets me is... swords on a space ship? But what I can't wait to see is... the best of magic vs the best of sci-fi battles.  ;D

Well, to be fair, it's only Nala who has swords, and her parents spirits are linked to them so it's not like she's going to throw them away, right? :)

[Fury]

How about a gunblade, final fantasy style? I bet the Gardless could do it ;)
I have no preference either way. I just want to see a good battle  ;D

[LilWolf]

It's a bit later than usual, but it's still Sunday, right? :)

This chapter introduces a few new characters and reveals some more of the plan the elves have cooked up. There's even a bit of action for the first time in this story. I hope you enjoy it.

Link: Horizon
Alternate link also updated.

As usual, new chapter next week.

[Fury]

The Earth elemental on the ship in space - that's a sight to see.  :)

[LilWolf]

And chapter 4 is out.

Link: Horizon

[Ketchum]

Finished until Guardian Spirit Part Three. Interesting story, I am hooked :D

[LilWolf]

Finished until Guardian Spirit Part Three. Interesting story, I am hooked :D

Glad to hear you're liking it :)

[LilWolf]

Chapter 5 is done. Enjoy :)

Link: Horizon

[Fury]

How would an elven commando compare with a human commando in terms of skills and abilities?