I think what is wrong with the Peoples of Dwilight page is that it is primarily northern and also seems to have an Everguard bias that makes it difficult for anyone else to role-play. I'd keep some of those elements while broadening other things to make it more applicable to Dwilight in general.
That's probably because one of the founders of Everguard was *very* active in developing that kind of information. As a result, nearly all the information he generated was centered around Everguard and its place on the island. Despite the fact that Everguard as a powerhouse was very short-lived, nearly all of what he wrote was from the viewpoint of "Everguard as an everlasting world power". The player was very talented and creative, and knew a lot about how to make his pages attractive, with substantial content.
