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Toms Other Games => Legends => Characters => Topic started by: Andrew on December 22, 2017, 10:45:44 AM
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A [ERROR: "tug/pull/feeling/push"?]. Or a [ERROR: "feeling/touch/sensation"?]. The faintest of them, graced [ERROR: "his/her/its/???"? ASSUME: "his"] [ERROR: "self/being/conciousness"?]. No, it grazed his [ERROR: "counciousness/self/mind/being"?]. As one [ERROR: "dies/inalive/unbeing/destroyed"?], another is [ERROR: "created/begun/started/born"?]. That is what was [ERROR: "determined/predestined/fated/always"?]. No, it was [ERROR: "discussed/agreed/determined/fated"?]. Irrelevance. No matter. No time. No space? Pause. [PARADOX: Pause in zero spacetime?] Or it would be in that whence he had [ERROR: "come/arrived/appeared/begun"]. To him, the question was [ERROR: "unsounding/mute/pointless/meaningless"?]. He had transcended spacetime as well as [ERROR: "place/dimension/level/existence"?] and [ERROR: "place/dimension/level/existence"?].
He waited. [PARADOX: Pause in zero spacetime?]
[ERROR: "existence/self/level/dimension/all"?] [ERROR: "determined/begun/started/placed"?].
He waited.
Then the [ERROR: "place/being/existence/all"? ASSUME: "universe"] breathed.
Like those [ERROR: "before/not yet/after"][PARADOX: "Referencing non-referential point"] there would be [ERROR: "not-self/others/enemies/allies/beings"? ASSUME: "others"].
If he was here, they would be too. If they were not yet, they would be soon.
He [ERROR: "looked/viewed/surveyed"?].
A star.
A world.
The balance was incomplete.
So this was to be his beginning.
He would have many names, and many legends, but some would he was known as [ERROR: "Name/Self/Reference/Solarus"? ASSUME: Solarus].
Enter the trans-/higher-dimensional being.
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Actually, in the Time chapter, I defined that the world has a moon. And for the moment, let's not play around with such big toys. Making a map of an entire world is challenge enough. :-)
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There, no more editing of the moon or giving it a particular color, as cool as laying claim to the moon would've been.
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One day the moon shall be yours ;)