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Roleplaying / Re: The assorted bits of Aldrakar Renodin's Life
« on: September 30, 2013, 11:08:05 AM »
A battle with several nobles against a horde of monsters. The RP was written and shared after the battle, I've asked the people've included if it was alright what I had their characters do and invited them to alter what they disliked. So far people have always been happy and agreed.


Iron Rain

The lines shuffled and the officers of each contingent of soldiers barked orders as they dressed the lines. Pushing men bodily into their positions. Swordsmen stood next to javelineers and next to them stood again more swordsmen. The right flank was made up of warriors dressed in steel mesh armours covering their bodies like skin topped with slender but immaculately constructed helms. Strong recurve bows in hand with hip-quivers opened. Small round shields of fine steel quality on their back and sabers still sheathed.

Lord Amyclas made up the left flank with his Argonauts, strong men ready to hold the line. Next to them stood Aldrakar with his shieldguard. Again shoulder to shoulder with Lord Ezra's javelineers like they had in battles before. The right flank was dominated by the elite soldiers of Lord Saul.

Behind this wall of makeshift infantry stood Marshal Sholan with his Nigh Arrows brigade. He commanded the second line. Next to his men stood Lady Lucini's marksmen with splendid light wood longbows. A curious and small mob of peasants with pitchforks and sickles huddled near the archers, they were spend but still fueled with anger.

From the broken plain before the Lurian warhost a large herd of monsters had gathered and with gurgling sounds and screeches they tried to instill fear in the Lurian warriors. Their scissored claws hefted into the air and their canines a bright, ivory white in the morning light.

The metallic links churned together as Aldrakar looked back at Marshal Sholan. Their eyes met and that single look confirmed the battle-plan they had devised the evening before. Aldrakar turned his attention back to his men and the oncoming enemy. The beasts had started to move. They came on slowly but every step of theirs was 5 of any normal man or woman. Thick and heavy hides of smudged browns, dark, near black eyes and curved upward turned horns protruding from their skulls.

Aldrakar unsheathed his broadsword and let the flames that leapt from the blade be a beacon for his men. ''Lets bring fire and steel to their hearts!'' He tried to make it sound confident and somewhat cocky and didn't do all that bad if you could believe the few chuckles and grins from his men.

Marshal Sholan had different idea's though and his voice rang clear as he issued the order to open fire. Air dragged away and tugged at hairs and shreds of fabric as the missiles flew over the heads of the infantry. Cloud after cloud of arrows and javelins sailed through the air and arched down onto the lumbering monsters. Sequels, shrieks and guttural roars exploded from their ranks as the missiles found their marks.

An arrow dove into bestial  flesh, puncturing the skin, ripping through the muscle and severing sinew until it ultimately shattered the bone it found deep inside the meat. Pieces of said bone expunged from the monster's flesh. A javelin was seen caving a skull in, the sound both wet and crunchy. The spectacle was bloody and almost pitiful. The monsters had no chance at all. They never even managed to travel half the distance to the infantry line before they were decimated. Only a handful of stragglers managed to break away and run for cover.

After the aerial slaughter the infantry wall eased up a bit. Tension released through outlets of breath, sighs and some laughter. Aldrakar put his sword back into its sheath and turned about to face the archery line. His eyes once more locked with Marshal Sholan's and they exchanged nods. At times gestures speak volumes and this was one of those gestures, their plan had worked.


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Roleplaying / The assorted bits of Aldrakar Renodin's Life
« on: September 30, 2013, 11:05:24 AM »
Hey there,

In this thread I will try to post the Roleplays I've written with Aldrakar Renodin. For some I've been rewarded with RP medals, other Trust but that aside (and I am proud to have received them). I think it would be fun to share what this game has brought me and those I've been able to share with.

The RP's I've written were inspired by the people my character has interacted with and I view them in part a testimony and thanks to their contributions to this great game we all play.

I can't post all of the RP's as some are already lost due to the 30 day expiration date but I'll try to post the Fun one's here. Educational, inspirational, historic value and just for fun.

Feel free to comment on them, add your own RP's that regard Aldrakar Renodin or discuss various writing styles.

Thanks for the fun game everyone.

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My most engaging character is my adventurer, but that is also due to the island he is on.

I take that as a big compliment even if I can only hope to claim to have aided to the atmosphere he finds himself in.

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BM General Discussion / Re: Character Count
« on: September 02, 2013, 01:57:40 PM »
I had 2 nobles and an advy fairly soon. Learned the ropes with my first character and then moved on to asking around which other realms were nice. Proceeded to create my second character and got curious about advies so yeah. That filled up my character slots in under a month.

As soon as I garnered 5 or was it 7? Family fame I made my 3rd noble, pauzing my advy, in a third and different realm on a different continent.

I have avoided deleting characters, if I didn't like one place I took the time to travel away to different realms and / or emigrate.

With the slower pace this game runs at, changing realms is a somewhat strenuous process in my opinion. 3 character slots would've been nice from the start. If I would receive a 4th slot I would most likely make another character hehe.

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Helpline / Re: RP capture/torturing
« on: August 26, 2013, 11:21:07 AM »
If you are unsure I suppose you could always send an OOC message to the person asking / making sure they agree or are fine with it and go from there.

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Helpline / Re: Medals
« on: August 26, 2013, 11:10:59 AM »
I've been playing the game since March this year. Basically I decided for a character concept and played them out. I had 2 nobles and 1 advy (who didn't get any interaction).

Just send letters to everyone, asking, small talk and write RP's.  Open your mouth and stay In Character.

Since then I was awarded 7 RP medals, 1 Fun medal and 1 Trust medal. I try to encourage people with small OOC messages when I see a good letter or rp if I cannot give a medal myself. Other than that. Most of my content creation has been in the realm I have been part of with exception of a handful of guilds and 1 religion.

I am fiercely proud of each medal I am rewarded with and really feel like I'm going to stick around battlemaster.

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Dwilight / Re: Dwilight University's Newspaper Revival Project
« on: July 04, 2013, 08:53:52 AM »
I quite like the idea, I've been meaning to join the DwiU and pestering Vita to go and sign up already.

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General Talk / Re: How old are you?
« on: May 24, 2013, 11:48:35 AM »
26, the Netherlands.

Just to balance things out a bit eh, so many Americans.

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Roleplaying / Re: The Death of Adventurer Madison
« on: May 24, 2013, 09:46:13 AM »
Noes!

Nice to read here about it.
I've been waiting for some of the other advies to let Aldrakar know she actually died.

Thanks for helping me along in the arena of Roleplay, Madison was the first character I as a player Rp-ed with in Battlemaster. It's a real shame she died but occupational hazzard I suppose, something Madison was very well aware of it seemed to me.

Hope to see some kind of return but if not, thanks for enriching the game for me.

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