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Work in Progress / The Seeker Council: Chapter 6
« on: January 18, 2018, 01:57:13 AM »
Astalos took its eyes off from the ground to see the cloud. Then slowly moved its eyes back to the ground to look at the being of lava. It nodded to the both as it could feel that none of them could even get near the crevasse alone. Even two did not seem enough. But perhaps three could.

The being of lava, Quanaris, and the being of cloud, Reis, sought the leaking prime and so did Astalos. Its new peers had already poured their power to reach for the prime and it added its strength to aid their effort.

When its power met with its new peers, it felt strangely connected to the other two. It was a strange yet familiar feeling. It was what Astalos had yearned for since its birth. Its wish to become whole again. Although it was not as perfect as it had wished for, it could feel that it became a part of something bigger.

At that moment, Astalos knew the crevasse, the very source of prime, could no longer stop them from claiming it.

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Work in Progress / Re: Fear the Gods - Chapter 2
« on: January 18, 2018, 01:34:40 AM »
Is there any tie-in with the first chapter ?

Do you want a chapter that is directly related to your first chapter? I actually thought Fear the Gods was going to be something close to a collection of short stories.

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Work in Progress / Re: Fear the Gods - Chapter 2
« on: January 17, 2018, 07:11:09 AM »
Is there any tie-in with the first chapter ?
No. I couldn't think of anything to connect with the first chapter. Maybe I should post this as a standalone.

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Dwilight / Re: Lurian Resurgence
« on: January 16, 2018, 07:54:11 AM »
It is always the same.

More nobles -> Everyone wants to become a lord -> Expand -> Some people leave -> Empty lands -> Less stuff to do -> More people leave -> More vacant regions -> Zombie state -> More nobles

I suggest creating your own enemies if you don't want to move north. The best option is to fight Swordfell since it is Luria's closest realm but even that is kinda far. So the second best option is to get more nobles and expand quickly then break into 3 smaller realms and fight each other.

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 16, 2018, 07:51:26 AM »
Agree completely. One purpose of this alpha test is to figure those "breaking points" out.

I think you need more people for that. I don't think we currently have enough people to test the breaking point.

We probably want different sections for each continent and per continent maybe different timelines.

For example:

Overall: Creation
Branch 1: Continent A
Sub-Branch 1: Early Age
Sub-Branch 2: Middle Age
Sub-Branch 3: Late Age
Branch 2: Continent B
Sub-Branch 1: Early Age
Sub-Branch 2: Middle Age
Sub-Branch 3: Late Age

something like that maybe?

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East Island / Re: Redhaven
« on: January 16, 2018, 06:33:14 AM »
He's basically been inactive for, maybe, 3 months. Or something like that. We're actually pretty worried about the player. Ecthelion didn't respond to any IC or OoC letters sent to him during those months, even though he (or someone on his behalf) must have been logging on at least once a week to prevent loss of titles/autopausing before now.

It's hard to imagine that Brian/Ecthelion would play the game continuously for 14 years and then just up and leave without saying a word to anyone.

Damn. I hope he is alright.

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East Island / Re: Redhaven
« on: January 16, 2018, 06:15:28 AM »
Did Tezokian quit the game?

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 16, 2018, 02:04:10 AM »
I actually don't mind the confusing timeline 'for now' but imagine doing this with 20 people. It will just get out of control.

Also, I like the creativity aspect of the game but as Indirik mentioned, it is a both blessing and a curse. I feel you need to refine the definition consecutive chapters more.

Imagine a situation where chapter 3 is not really related to two previous chapters but people agree to pass it. That would just make that legend very incoherent.

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 16, 2018, 12:40:35 AM »
What about Prime Sources increasing a cap on the amount of Prime you can have?  So if I am part of a council with, say, one Prime Source then I can have a total of 15 Prime, but if I don't have any other sources then the most I can have is 5?

Instead of over complicating things, there should simply be something like a council prime pool where each member can take out x amount whenever they need. Obviously this should be changeable since every council will be different but at the same time you want to make it flexible enough to make each council unique. I guess there could be two ways of doing this. vertical or horizontal. If you are looking to build a more traditional pantheon, probably building it vertically would be the best option where the head of the pantheon hands out the points.

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Work in Progress / The Saga of Nayala - Chapter 1
« on: January 15, 2018, 10:59:23 PM »
'Nayala'[Create Hero, 1 Prime] ran as fast as her legs could take her. She was the only child of the ruler of Tascrig. Her father and his subjects would often call her 'the jewel of Tacrig'. No one objected to it as anyone who saw her could understand why. Her beauty captivated every man in Tascrig. She was her father's treasure and the pride of Tascrig. Traders often brought gifts to her from all over the world but no treasure was more precious than her. Whenever she left her palace to collect flowers, it felt like it was a small parade for the townsfolk.

That day started like a normal peaceful day. When the ground shook, she was visiting a small hill near the town to collect flowers like she often did. She headed back to Tascrig as soon as the shaking stopped, but she soon met waves of frightened people fleeing the town. She was quickly separated with her servants when they were swept away by the fleeing people. Nayala who quickly realized she was not going to find her servants anytime soon, however, decided to head back on her own.

She moved out of people's way and took a short cut she knew to head back. She was worried for her father. She knew something terrible must had happened in Tascrig to force so many people out of the town and her father was not the type of person to leave behind his subjects.

Before she even entered the town, however, she realized something beyond buildings near the gate. There was a strangely large cloud floating above the town. She knew it was no ordinary cloud when she saw two glowing blue eyes as no cloud she had seen had eyes. And below it, there was a giant mountain she had no memory of. Tascrig had no mountain near it and it definitely was not there when she left the town. She almost stopped breathing when the top of the mountain moved.

A moving mountain and a cloud with eyes...

She had never heard of such things. But her surprise did not end there. There was one more. When she was only a child, her father once took her to a place in the far north where the ground was bleeding with hot glowing blood. The same hot blood of the earth was here, standing before the mountain.

It even spoke!

Before she could comprehend what was going on, the mountain moved again. The top of the mountain turned toward Nayala. Her blue eyes, once praised to be as beautiful as the brightest stars, met the two giant rubies of the mountain. At that moment, her head was filled with white. When she came to her senses again, she realized she was running... away from the city. She ran until her legs finally gave out. Her consciousness faded as her body collapsed on the ground.

(Fixed some parts.)

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 15, 2018, 04:38:09 AM »
You do regenerate prime. It's in the rules somewhere. I forget how fast. Prime source would regenerate is faster, and allow access to purity.

Oh I must have missed that part. Thx for letting me know.

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 15, 2018, 02:05:30 AM »
Oh on more thing. Maybe for Prime, in case people run out, maybe 1 prime should be granted for free per week or every 3~4 days would be nice so people don't necessarily have to join a council. Or if we do get a client, maybe random events can give back some purity or prime. Maybe finding shards or something.

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Work in Progress / Re: The Color Green - Chapter 2
« on: January 14, 2018, 06:18:48 PM »
Need to vote on this.

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Legends / Re: Feedback and Discussion
« on: January 14, 2018, 02:53:57 AM »
I agree with purity. I think its name should probably be changed to be more straight forward. I actually do not really like the name. I get that it is a pure form of prime but something about the name just irks me. But not sure what would be a good replacement.

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Work in Progress / Re: The City States - Chapter 2
« on: January 14, 2018, 02:52:07 AM »
The last change you made definitely made a big improvement. I really like this chapter. I actually have nothing to add. Well done.

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