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LilWolf

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Re: The Balaria Thread
« Reply #135: December 29, 2013, 05:48:54 PM »
Hum, long time since last update. Time I corrected that.

Chapter 22 of The Pale Rose is upon us so the story has gone quite a way since I last updated this thread. I'll just post the links to all the parts.

The Pale Rose – Part One (chapters 1-6)
The Pale Rose – Part Two (chapters 7-14)
The Pale Rose – Part Three (chapters 15 ->)

Now, as for the other topic of the day. I’ve been working on a novel completely unrelated to Balaria. It’s about 77k words long or 205 pages with my usual layout. It is the first part of a trilogy in the fantasy/sci-fi genre. Usually I would just start posting chapters from it, but I want to do things a bit differently with it so the story will be the best it can be. Usually, no one besides me reads my texts before I put them on-line. Now, I would like to have someone else read the text and give their opinion on it. It can be just general feedback or you can add as detailed notes to it as you’d like. If you’re interested in doing something like that, let me know. I’d really appreciate the help :)
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