Mine was reviewed today as well:
Description Reviewed (5 hours, 37 minutes ago)
The new description of your region has been reviewed by a GameMaster, and has been rated bad.
Please keep in mind that these ratings are just feedback, and as we are all human, are influenced by mood and other circumstances. If you disagree, that's fine.
I did change it recently (couple of months ago), so perhaps it was reviewed because of that. However, the only things I changed were grammatical, ie changing "it's height is almost as great as it's breadth" to remove the errant apostrophes and before that it hadn't been updated since about 2009 I think; it may even have been 2007. Since the description has been there far longer than I've been in the realm, it's not something I can just go and change without removing items of information that may be part of the realm's rp'd history.
It doesn't do any of the obvious mistakes (eg list the names of the current lord/knights/realm or go on a political rant) - the only mention of characters and any politics is to say that a previous lord built a wall following a revolution. Since wall-building and revolutions are game-mechanic driven, they are factual and I see no reason why they shouldn't be listed in the description to give a little history, given it was related to the region in question.
The reason I didn't change anything other than grammar when my character took the lordship was because I thought it was ok. Obviously the previous lord also thought it was ok. As did the one in between (unless he just didn't care) since it hadn't been changed by the previous lord's character either.
I know the message says that it's just feedback, but if the game master doing the rating thinks he's seen something bad about it that all three-or-more previous lords have missed, then it's not much use to me if he doesn't point out what the problem is. He may well have a good point - perhaps he's noticed some part of the description that is anachronistic or clashes with information somewhere else in the game - but clearly I've not spotted it as a problem, or I'd have changed it.
If you want me to improve my description, you have to tell me what you don't like about it. Else I'm just going to assume you roll a dice and click "bad, good, excellent" at random without a penny of thought going into the process.
