Author Topic: Region Description Feedback  (Read 1636 times)

vonGenf

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Re: Region Description Feedback
« Topic Start: April 11, 2014, 07:04:26 PM »
I would remove the first sentence, the rationale being that the description should still work even if Perdan changes capital or even if Dimwood is no longer part of Perdan. The rest is history, so and it's OK to mention a long history of being part of Perdan, but the part that is written in the present tense should ideally be independent of IC changes.

I don't know if this was the issue that caused rejection, overall it looks fine to me, and that's a pretty minor criticism. I agree more feedback would be useful.
After all it's a roleplaying game.