# Quest: King of the Eastern Forest
My feedback:
- again, group damage everywhere, and very high values.
- strength 30 is a very high test. Characters typically have 5 or so in most attributes, on average, ignoring class. So a 4-character party can bring on average about 20 to a test, plus items. +10 from items is rare, they will have to use magic already.
- you give a LOT of xp for all challenges. My challenges typically have around 100 for normal challenges, 200 for tough ones, and 300 for extremely difficult end-bosses. Don't forget that all of them add up.
- "cave Chamber" - yaml keys cannot contain spaces and should be all lowercase.
- with ogre being 2-3 and progress 5, treasures will not be reached on success, because 2+5 = 7 (and 3+5 =
. - again, attribute_damage above 1 should be rare.
- gold 500 is also quite a lot. Again, remember it adds up. In this quest, they can take almost 900 gold, wow.
- group_damage 25 is a nearly guaranteed TPK. That should be reserved for much higher level quests.
- in general, by the story and events, this is a low-level quest and should be scaled down accordingly.
aside from that, it's a nice read and a cute small quest. Very nice.
