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Voting closed: January 01, 2018, 02:19:34 AM
Sorry for not commenting sooner! I like it, quite a bit. The style you went for was very much legend-y, but also somewhat personal. I don't think the story needs any changing or anything, except maybe just more strongly implying that you are creating the plants and all that stuff-- if that is what it is.
I like it as well. But for a story like this, how does the next person continue this story on?