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Approve this chapter?

yes
4 (66.7%)
no
1 (16.7%)
abstain
1 (16.7%)

Total Members Voted: 6

Voting closed: January 03, 2018, 08:26:37 AM

Author Topic: Creation Myth Chapter 1: Mikazuki, the First Continent  (Read 5763 times)

CryptCypher

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Two suggestions/thoughts:

#1 Perhaps people preferred the overall shape (or story) of the other continent, and thus voted for that one rather than yours. Since we were choosing a starting chapter, and "There can be only One"(tm), some voting yes for yours would likely vote no for the other, and vice versa. Now that the initial chapter is over, it'll probably be easy to get Mikazuki as a 2nd continent.

#2 the shape may have put people off. Its too, how do you say, cut and dry. I like it, but the geometry irks me all the same. Perhaps embellish it to produce a more organic shape / contour, maybe even slice the continent into 2 and have the isle of Pyre be a true island amidst the bay off a central channel, sort of like how Muzahdorf/Farasan/Socotra islands hang out in the Red Sea past the Isthmus of Suez (Canal)
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