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Author Topic: Creation Myth Chapter 1: Mikazuki, the First Continent  (Read 5842 times)

Zakky

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To me it was mostly the shape. Also, the story about directions confused me a bit. I couldn't understand why elements were used to describe directions. That came out of blue.

For you, probably the shape of the continent gave you flavor but I really disliked how unnatural it looked. Plus it was too personalized for me. You put everything in already so there was little I could do to add to the continent.