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Author Topic: Creation Myth: Animals and Men  (Read 6505 times)

Zakky

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Re: Creation Myth: Animals and Men
« Topic Start: January 01, 2018, 11:08:13 PM »
Well-written and good visuals. I'm personally curious about the last man, in whose form the sphere's final vestige was collapsed. I could see that person later gaining ascended consciousness or becoming a hero themselves. I smell shenanigan opportunities... Cue rivalry of First and Final Man! (I'd call dibs but we'll see how fareth the vote)

You can definitely write about that guy XD. I actually did not think the way you did about the last guy. After reading the way you put the last guy, I definitely see some nice opportunities to expand the story.