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Author Topic: The City States - Chapter 2  (Read 714 times)

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Re: The City States - Chapter 2
« Topic Start: January 12, 2018, 06:44:12 PM »
I think maybe you should add some parts from the first chapter to this. It doesn't really feel like the first chapter and this chapter is connected.

That might make things better. The horsemen were heading to your settlements to see what's going on.