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Re: Fear the Gods - Chapter 2
« Topic Start: February 03, 2018, 06:07:51 AM »
Quote from: Tom on February 03, 2018, 05:54:48 AM
Small improvement suggested: It is not always completely clear who is speaking.

Fixed some stuff. Let me know if it is better.
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