Just read all of the Guardian Spirits today. I was disappointed it only lasted me a day of reading though.
For some reason, I had gotten a vibe that the goddess Lorien was really more malicious than what she was made out to be.
The only criticism I would say, is that the ending seemed a bit rushed. Kinda was expecting more action from Derien after his show in Ramyn.
I'm very anxious to read your next long term story. However, I'd really like to see more of the characters from the Guardian Spirit.
