Author Topic: Garas' backstory  (Read 4225 times)

Victor C

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Re: Garas' backstory
« Topic Start: August 27, 2016, 02:52:04 PM »
I was like "Hmm, thought that screaming meant death....(few lines later) Oh there's the death  ;D"

I liked it, though the title had me expecting more to do with Gara. I feel something like "Gara's Creation" or birth or something to signify that this isn't so much all about Gara, but about Aeneas. The story was great though.
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